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I have never written poems before

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#1 Jan 21 - 8PM
Movingforwardnow
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I have never written poems before

I have no idea where these are coming from...but, oh well.

I hate you so much
It can't be described
I hate you so much
And hate your drive bys.

I do not like you
I hate what you've done
But for me and my kids
We will still have fun.

You have not ruined me
I will continue living
You have not ruined me
You are the one who's sinning.

I forgive myself
But can't forgive you
I have moved on with my life
To you I say SHOO!

Jan 22 - 4AM
Jar of hearts
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Love them!

Your poems do not suck! They are real and you can feel your emotions when you read them, keep them coming :-) xx
Jan 22 - 4AM
Black Pearl
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Beautiful! I look forward to more :)

Keep it up its a great way to express your emotions :) The part i found most touching....... why? because it is so true- "You have not ruined me I will continue living You have not ruined me You are the one who's sinning."
Jan 21 - 10PM
CrAzY4trying
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love it...

i love to write... such a creative outlet.....
Jan 21 - 9PM
needing2know
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This is what I sent him the

This is what I sent him the day after he did the D&D As we sat there quiet, I was reminded of all the reasons I lust you, Your smile and the way it teased me seductively, Your laugh and the way it tempted me, Your eyes, and they way they seem to hypnotize me. As we lay there silent I was reminded of all the reasons I Love You, Your smile and the way it brings such life into me, Your laugh and the way it makes everything ok, Your eyes and the way they seem to read my thoughts. As we stand here now, I am reminded of all the reasons I hate you, Your smile and they way it confuses me, Your laugh, and they way it seems to mock me, Your eyes and they way they can look into mine and not feel a thing
Jan 21 - 10PM (Reply to #5)
Fearless
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I like this one even better

this one is amazing. it makes me feel for you and I can see your pain in it...even though it is not a long poem you can definitely see the journey you took and the awakening to the realization of the "true" person he is. I can relate as well to the lines you wrote in this poem. I'm so sorry for your pain. Keep writing poetry, you have a gift.

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Jan 21 - 8PM
Fearless
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I like it

Good way to vent...get it all out girl!

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Jan 21 - 8PM (Reply to #2)
Movingforwardnow
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Thanks

I know my poems suck, but they make me feel better :)
Jan 21 - 9PM (Reply to #3)
Fearless
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didn't suck at all

i enjoyed it and i can see where it could be very good therapy for you. i paint ... did a self portrait with my heart bleeding and a ghost heart lifting out of my body. goofy i know but to me it helped. do what helps you, that's all that matters

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